A good basis of a song, sounds a little unfinished imo like it needs some extra fill with an extra melody or intrument. Abrupt ending kinda kills the mood, guitar at the beginning sounds pretty shaky.
Vocalist is very good, other musicians sound fine, just feels like the song is missing something.
I don't know if you plan on revising this song or not, but in its current state its decent. Good luck on future stuff! :)
Sweet! Awesome beat and awesome synth sounds.
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