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Nice stuff! I enjoy your developments and continuations throughout the song. Maybe a taaad too repetitive and dragged out at times (imo ofc) but otherwise a solidly composed track.

Production side can use a little bit of work. Don't get me wrong, it's not bad or anything, but just a little rough around the edges. Sometimes it's hard to pick the individual synths with my ear because they are mushing together especially at busy/low-centered parts like 00:45-00:55. The volume/compressing/mixing thing-a-ma-jigs with the different parts (most notably the arpeggio bass and the high-pitched synth that later becomes the lead) could use some refinement, as in their current form they aren't balanced the best with each other.

One last important thing, always remember to use panning! Having everything in the center is harder on the ear and less interesting-sounding, get creative and do some stereo enhancement and/or panning to left/right with your different parts. Remember that panning doesn't have to mean all the way to the left or right, just do it enough so that everything is crowding into the center (unless the situation dictates otherwise ofc).

Choice of sounds for the style I believe you're going for is spot on, and so are the rhythms and chord structure.

Overall again, I like your work! As a fellow aspiring composer/producer guy I want to be fair and constructive but challenging, and I hope my suggestions can maybe help you grow as am artist. (Also, just so you know I'm most definitely the nitpicky type with music I listen to, so I'm probably more critical than most listening, haha.) Please keep up what you're doing, you got potential!

Poosac responds:

Forgot to thank you for the detailed review! I will keep all these tips in mind while working on future tracks!

One sitting...I envy your talent/skill...good stuff man.

Waterflame responds:

Thanks! :)

A good basis of a song, sounds a little unfinished imo like it needs some extra fill with an extra melody or intrument. Abrupt ending kinda kills the mood, guitar at the beginning sounds pretty shaky.
Vocalist is very good, other musicians sound fine, just feels like the song is missing something.

I don't know if you plan on revising this song or not, but in its current state its decent. Good luck on future stuff! :)

Sweet! Awesome beat and awesome synth sounds.

ngl chief i don't come here often, check out my soundcloud link if you wanna hear more music tho

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